You're right, Susie, titles are everything and yet they are so difficult to master.

I'm wondering though, do you think your title really reflect the story? It's part of the story, but such a small part.

Linda Carroll, in my opinion, writes brilliant titles. This one for

example.

https://medium.com/the-narrative-arc/you-and-me-and-the-miracle-of-the-butterfly-effect-99246db00563