You know that, EKO? This one is too bloody hard...story nerd by way of clarification...I just loved this. So much imagery, so much comparing and contrasting...I was just caught up in the you of the story.As for the clouds...I used to take my students outside. We'd lie of the grass and watch the clouds moving and changing. Some kids would say it was boring, but some kids wrote the most amazing stuff.

But the Achilles heel? I think that must be me. I couldn't find one:

Sorry Scaaat:)