Maria Rattray
1 min readApr 12, 2024

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Trisha I am so with you.

I hate the incessant scrolling I see, but I love the fact that I can pick up my phone and immediately speak to my sister in Scotland.

I love that we can so easily share photos, or pieces of news.

I love the ease of research.

What I don't love is that this piece has enjoyed so little appreciation.

So I spent a few minutes massaging your title. Here's what I came up with.

Quit Grumbling About Cell Phones and the endless scrolling on by some. Focus instead on all you can do in the blink of an eye

This was your sharethrough score.

Overall: 71 • Engagement: 54 • Impression: 85

This was mine.

Overall: 93 • Engagement: 87 • Impression: 100

It's worth spending a few minutes working on your title. I don't always get mine right, but I try much harder these days.

If you like mine (hope you're okay with my having done this) feel free to use it. You just never know.

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Maria Rattray
Maria Rattray

Written by Maria Rattray

Writer, author, teacher, fun-loving poet. Trying valiantly to make the world a better place. Helping you to guide the future. Find me at: https://ponmyword.com

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