Maria Rattray
Jun 20, 2022

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Fabulous story telling Barbara. I can't for the life of me imagine any mother opening her daughter's letter, and then, the duplicity of hiding it...probably thinking you'd never find out. So bad.

Loved the pace and the build of tension, not to mention the snotty nose.

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Maria Rattray
Maria Rattray

Written by Maria Rattray

Writer, author, teacher, fun-loving poet. Trying valiantly to make the world a better place. Helping you to guide the future. Find me at: https://ponmyword.com

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