Maria Rattray
Nov 9, 2024

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Emma I wish I could give you many more claps for this one.

The image of the bedroom couldn't have been more disgusting if you'd tried, and that was supported beautifully by the dialogue.

I thought I'd seen a few seedy joints in my time, but this one takes first prize.

I might be carrying this in my mind for the rest of the day!

Bravo!

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Maria Rattray
Maria Rattray

Written by Maria Rattray

Writer, author, teacher, fun-loving poet. Trying valiantly to make the world a better place. Helping you to guide the future. Find me at: https://ponmyword.com

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