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A New Challenge …

Something we all need to cheer us!

Maria Rattray
2 min readJan 28, 2025
This is definitely not a neglected baby, so it can’t be me! Photo by DICSON on Unsplash

Despite being dog-weary and in need of a break, I was nonetheless drawn into Barb Dalton’s challenge (her writing son’s, actually) to write about our birth, essentially a truth but including one lie.

The word count must be 150!

I’m assuming the lie explanation doesn’t count in the 150 words.

I like the odd lie, more an exaggeration, so how could I resist?

Here’s Barb’s prompt!

My story follows.

When my mum found out she was pregnant with me, she was too afraid to tell her doctor who had advised her not to have any more babies … ever!

She already had my sister and brother, she had had polio as a child, and to be honest, two should have been enough.

So my nine-month gestation was conducted with no medical check-ups, since her doctor knew nothing, and she just hoped and prayed that everything would turn out fine.

I was born on her birthday, as was my sister-in-law, who was in the same ward that day.

Some years later we girls met through work. In the weeks leading up to Christmas, she needed a partner for a work dinner.

I offered my brother … “though I don’t think you’ll fancy him,” I added.

Somehow they clicked, and two years later they were happily married.

I’m assuming my lie will be disclosed at a later date. Not sure if writers get to guess the lie first.

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Maria Rattray
Maria Rattray

Written by Maria Rattray

Writer, author, teacher, fun-loving poet. Trying valiantly to make the world a better place. Helping you to guide the future. Find me at: https://ponmyword.com

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